IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Topic 38: Paris Metro station passengers – Line Graph

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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Topic 38: Paris Metro station passengers – Line Graph
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Deepabista65gmailcom

Posted on Jan 4, 2024

The line graph displays passengers in Paris Metro Station from 6:00am in the morning till the end of the day at 22:00pm. It shows the data of pick hours where there was highest number of passenger and when there was lowest.
Generally, it seems like early in the morning when the metro starts there were about 100 people which rapidly rised tp 400 passengers till 8:00am which was the highest number of people that day. After that number seem to decline and fluctuate comming upto 16:00pm there were less than 100 passengers that day. Then sharply increasing the number of passanger it went upto around 400 passangers at 18:00pm. Following the day number of passanger seem to be dropping and fluctuate little bit then it was closing time of metro station. The data demonstrate the peak hour and lowest hour in the station.

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IELTS Expert

IELTS Expert

Posted on Jan 5, 2024

Overall Band: 3.5
Word limit is not reached and the response written is too small for the question. Very limited points are covered to explain the graph with the mechanical representation of the data.

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Muhammadjon

Posted on Nov 8, 2023

The data displays how the number of Paris Metro station users changes from 6.00 to 22.00.

Overall, the figure for Paris Metro station travelers fluctuates throughout the day with 8am and 6pm being the peak hours.

The figure starts at 100 and shows a steep increase of fourfold until 8am. Then, it again falls to just below 200 at 10am, and a slight rise can be seen in the next hour. 12am comes with a moderate growth which is followed by a relatively stable trend by 2pm.

Reaching 300 at 2pm, the number experiences an all-time low of almost 100 at 4pm after which it surges dramatically till 6pm just like it does at 8am. However, at 8pm, the number of the passengers diminishes nearly to the point of 4pm, and after going up and down, it stands at well over 100 at the end of the given period.

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IELTS Expert

IELTS Expert

Posted on Nov 8, 2023

Overall Band 5
The recounting of detail is mainly mechanical; thus user needs to emphasise in detail on the selected points.The range of grammatical structures is limited and rather repetitive; advanced grammar needs to be introduced in the writing.
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Hasan

Posted on Oct 10, 2023

This chart illustrates how the number of travelers varies over a day, in one of the most popular means, the “metro”in the capital of France “Paris” .Generally speaking,we can see that there are two peaks on the line. The first one at 8.00 am and the other at 6.00 pm. The number of users in the early morning is one hundred , then increases in a steady way to reach the highest point, which equals 400. After this time, the numbers start to decline by half compared with eight o’clock .

On the other hand ,the smallest number is in the evening at 6.00 pm with less than 100 people.

According to the information presented in the graph , we can say that the chance of getting a place to sit on the train will be in the afternoon, whereas you may still have to stand during the rush hours.

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IELTS Expert

IELTS Expert

Posted on Jan 8, 2024

Overall Band:3.5
A clear distinction for the graphs given cannot be made in the answer. There is a limited use of cohesive devices with some inaccuracy. Subordinate clauses are rare and simple sentences predominate.
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dirmanas

Posted on Jun 2, 2022

The line graph illustrates the number of people in Paris Metro station over a given day of the year.

Overall, the number of passengers in Paris metro station fluctuated in specific period of the year. The metro station welcomed the highest number of people between 7 to 8 am. The people almost remained the same between 11 am to 14 pm.

By 16 pm, the number of people who used the metro station fell to less than 100 at 16 pm. After that time, the passengers’ number rose again dramatically and reached almost 400. There was a sharp decrease in passengers from 390 to 110 between 18 pm and 20 pm. After a small rise at 9 pm, the passengers rose at 22 pm from 180 to 110, respectively.

It is clear that the number of passengers rose to the highest level in the Paris metro station both in the early morning and early in the evening.

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Glen Brown

Glen Brown

Posted on Jun 3, 2022

Band Score: 5
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