IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic 08: Increase in violent crime

IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic 08: Increase in violent crime
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Posted on Jul 5, 2016

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Posted on Dec 20, 2015

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Posted on Nov 6, 2015

Write about the following topic:

Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.

To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words

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TRINH QUANG LUC

TRINH QUANG LUC

Posted on Nov 26, 2015

Let’s me take some overall words in this discourse. First of all, This above essay is not comply with the requirement of IELTS essay, namely the amount of words is far beyond of limitation allowed. That will lead to take much time for practice anything else. Secondly, in the introduction paragraph, the writer did not mention his( her) thesis completely, even the balanced opinion was not clear on it. Some academic should be used in the structural in order to obtain high marks, and also there are plenty of the simple structural should be changed by academic ones for getting high score. Using synonym & antonym should be paid attention to apply more. Eventually, if writer wishes an expected score, let’s figure out the structural by referring some effective methods of Ryan or Simon on the internet. Regards.

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