Academic IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic ( In January, 2016) & Band 9 Model Essay.

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IELTS Writing Actual Test in January, 2016 & Band 9 Argumentative Essay – Topic: 

Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many traditionalists believe that many people have access to the Internet, however, conventional newspapers will continue as the major source of news. I totally disagree with this view.

The speed and convenience of the Internet in this digital age have led to the increasing popularity of online news. Firstly, the Internet is able to provide up-to-the-minute news as it happens, 24 hours a day every day. As long as 1 have my smart phone or laptop with me, 1 can connect almost instantly to the Internet, surf the websites and access the news of my choice across the globe. Secondly, more and more people now’ have access to the Internet and this trend appears set to continue. The more widespread the accessibility of the Internet, the more people will come to rely on it as their new’s source.

In contrast, newspapers have drawbacks which affect their popularity. One major disincentive of relying on newspapers as a news source is the cost. Competing with freely available news online, newspaper publishers are facing the reality of falling circulation figures. Some major American newspapers have now’ introduced online versions alongside their printed editions in an attempt to arrest this trend. Another disadvantage of newspapers is the amount of paper consumed in their production. With growing environmental awareness, there is a body of public opinion which rejects buying newspapers because this involves cutting trees and transporting them to paper mills. While this may not be a major factor at present, the environmental argument will almost certainly gain ground in the future.

In conclusion, I would argue that newspapers will continue to decline in importance, and more and more people will use the Internet to access the news.

(283 words)

Use words/phrases:

traditionalists: people who prefer traditional ways of acting and thinking.

Example: I agree with those traditionalists who think that drinks served in plastic cups taste worse than drinks served in glasses or normal cups.

conventional: following what has been done in the past.

Example: The dress code in our company is conventional – all the men must wear a suit and tie.

digital age: a period when information is sent electronically.

Example: In this digital age, many people have computer skills and Internet access.

up-to-the-minute: having the latest information.

Example:Up-to-the-minute weather forecasts are always available on the Internet.

surf the websites: look through various sites on the Internet.

Example: When he researched his essay, John surfed the websites that appeared to contain the most useful information.

circulation figures: the figures for the number of copies of a newspaper sold each day.

Example: After the price of the newspaper went up, the circulation figures immediately fell.

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