Academic IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic: Sports & Sample Essay

Essay Topic

Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Sample

The World Cup football match and the Olympics are held worldwide with great national support and expectations. As a fan of those competitions, I am totally convinced that sporting events can be necessary for international relations and national unity.

First of all, the World Cup, Olympics and other international games work for easing tensions among different nations. For example, South and North Korea have football games regularly which give two nations a chance to understand each other deeply. In the mid 1990s, a hundreds of North Korean supporters came to South Korea with the footballers and they were very excited during the sporting events. Even if it sounds ridiculous, many South Koreans were quite surprised at that moment when North Koreans shouted and cried during the match. We all realized that they were very normal sports fans even though they were occasionally very secretive. Through the sports, two divided nations could reduce their political and ideological tensions and could feel the patriotic unity.

On the other hand, some sports matches can make international relations worse. For instance, football or baseball games between Korea and Japan are always big matches in two countries where full of tensions overflow. Sometimes, after the matches, the two rivals blame each other and their patriotic emotions explode in an aggressive way. Even much worse scenario is that the troubles caused by losing games affect the players directly. As far as I know, a couple of Korean players in Japan are suffered from invisible discrimination after the match between two countries.

In conclusion, I think that international sporting occasions can be one of the good ways to ease tensions or to release patriotism safely. However, I believe that games can not be the fundamental ways for the sound patriotism or peaceful international relations.

Useful Vocabulary

Ease tension (phrase) lessen or cause to lessen in tension

Secretive (adj) deliberately not telling people things

Ideology (n) a set of ideas with a strong social influence

Patriotic (adj) feeling a lot of love, respect, and duty towards your country

Overflow (verb) to feel an emotion very strongly

Emotion explodes (collocation) to express strong emotion in a sudden, noisy, and often violent way

In an aggressive way (phrase) behaving in an angry or rude way that shows you want to fight, attack, or argue with someone

Scenario (n) a situation that could possibly happen

Suffer from (v) to experience something very unpleasant or painful

Invisible discrimination (phrase) unfair treatment of someone because of their religion, race, or other personal features that  cannot be seen

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