Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films – IELTS Writing Task 2 Discursive Essays

Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films – IELTS Writing Task 2 Discursive Essays
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Janice Thompson

Janice Thompson

Soon after graduating with a Master’s in Literature from Southern Arkansas University, she joined an institute as an English language trainer. She has had innumerous student interactions and has produced a couple of research papers on English language teaching. She soon found that non-native speakers struggled to meet the English language requirements set by foreign universities. It was when she decided to jump ship into IELTS training. From then on, she has been mentoring IELTS aspirants. She joined IELTSMaterial about a year ago, and her contributions have been exceptional. Her essay ideas and vocabulary have taken many students to a band 9.

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Aditya Pingle

Posted on Oct 25, 2021

Hello, Can you please review my essay?

Art forms have progressed over various countries over generations. Telecommunication advances have enabled humans to share the information on widespread scale. There have been insecurities about a foreign films challenging the perspectives of local communitites. I voice for introducing ourselves to the foreign films. In following essay, I will state reasons to support my belives.

Local communities have directly or indirectly expressed insecurities about the foreign culture influencing their younger generations in a negative manner. It is accepted by the masses that foreign media magnifies certain incidents and represents them as flaws about their culture. Certain media houses have released research stating that foreign content released in India, attracts the younger generation by depicting false images of adultery in western society. These movies have been seamlessly hiding up the consequences of such actions against the well thought traditions formed by the vedic Indian society. Such narrow minded observations by the influenced media houses, rooted the insecurities deep in certain communities.

No matter the era, outdated cultures were uprooted by either the oppressed or intellectually strong groups. Studies have shown 65% of the foreign films introduce us to the cultural traditions India has been missing. Talking about Indian culture, various inhumane practices were abolished from Indian culture after British had ruled India. Sati – the practice of a widow giving up her life, child marriage, restricting women from education are a few to be named. This was possible only when the local communities were exposed to the better parts of outer world. Such mass attracting art form, will thus only help the local communities to reshape their culture and be in sync with the world around.

Foreign films have been known to introduce us to the unseen facets of the new culture. These experiences, will help improve the traditions of any culture and should be welcomed with open arms.

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Janice Thompson

Janice Thompson

Posted on Oct 25, 2021

Overall band : 5.5

Grammar: Concentrate on the usage of articles, grammatical numbers, difference between verb and a noun, etc.
Introduction plays a vital role in winning the examiner’s impression. Mistakes in the introduction will certainly lower your band score

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