IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Topic 36: Information on UAE government spending in 2000 – Pie chart

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Prudhvi-shankar

Posted on Dec 7, 2023

The Pie chart depicts the information in which the UAE government spends the amount in different fields for the following year 2000.
The Government spends more in Social security which is about 31.9% . The second largest expenses spent in health and personal social services are near to 53 billion AED , about to 16.9%. On the other hand the government covers 12% in education and a debt in revenue that covers 7% in defence which was 22 billion AED.

However the government declares 4.2% in industries, agriculture and in employment .Other expenses spent by the government such as housing heritage and environment, other expenditure covers nearly to 12% which is 22 billion AED. At last law and order covers up to 23 billion AED of total government spends.

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Posted on Dec 7, 2023

Overall Band: 6
Punctuation is faulty and grammatical errors are present in the answer. User has tried to make complex sentences but they are very few. Maximum accuracy is found in simple sentences only.

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Anamika Upreti

Posted on Nov 22, 2023

The given diagram illustrates, amount of money UAE government spends in different fields of the country in year 2000.

Overall, highest amount of budget was allocated for social security of the country. However, minimum money was separated for development of transport facility.
With regard, Most of the amount was given to social security which was more than quarter of the budget that is rate of 31.9%.Similarly, second priority was Health and personal social services of the citizens which was more than quarter half of the total budget 16.9%.
However, budgets for Debt interest, Defence and other expenditure government was 7.3% respectively and 7%. Likewise UAE spends 12.1% of total budget on education of the citizens of country. Moving on to Low and order , Industry , agriculture , employment and housing heritage money for them was nearly to 6% of the total budget.Furthermore, Lowest amount of budget was given to transport sector that is 2.9%.
To conclude with Highest ratio of budget was for social security and Lowest was for Transport.

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Posted on Nov 23, 2023

Hello Anamika,
Band – 4
The report highlights few important features of the infographic but lacks detail.
The vocabulary used is very basic and should be enhanced.
The range of grammatical structures should be enhanced by using a variety of sentence structures. There are a lot of grammatical errors as well.

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