Sample Essay for Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 Topic 41 – Line Graph

Model answer 06:

The chart shows the employment patterns in the USA from 1930 to 2010. Globally, the percentages of Industrial, Sales and Office(SO), Technical, Other Service(OS), have been stable among 0% to 40%. On the other hand, Farming, Fishing and Foresting(FFF) have drastically decreased from near to 80 % to approximately 0%. First, Technical and Industrial has been rising gradually since 1930. In 2010, they were approximately 30%, despite they were close to 0% in 1930. As for SO and OS, they have been going up and down among 0% to 20%, that is why it is almost same compared in 1930 to in 2010.

In contrast, FFF have dramatically gone down from 1930 to 2010. In 1930, FFF was the highest one among them. Furthermore, the point was at least 7 times than the second category. However, in 2010, FFF was the lowest one. As the graph shows, FFF had been diminishing mildly since 1930. Then from 1970, FFF started falling away increasingly. In 1980, the biggest category was still FFF, and second one was Industrial. The gap between them was about two times. In 1990, the gap between FFF and Industrial had vanished. but they were the same percentage and the highest yet. In 2000, FFF had reached the lowest, at this time, FFF and OS were the same percentage. Finally FFF was the lowest below any other categories in 2010.

(231 words)

THIS TEST IS COLLECTED & IMPLEMENTED BY IELTSMATERIAL.COM

Free IELTS Practice Tests – Reading, Listening, Writing, Speaking  Test|

IELTS Exam Preparation – Free IELTS material and resources.

Download IELTS Preparation Material & Tips)

<

p class=”essay”> 

The following two tabs change content below.
Improve your IELTS skills with tips, model answers, lessons, free books, and more ------------ "The more you share, the more you get."

Main IELTS Pages:

This website is to develop your IELTS skills with tips, model answers, lessons, free books, and more. Each section (Listening, Speaking, Writing, Reading) has a complete collection of lessons to help you improve your IELTS skills.

Get all the latest updates/lessons via email:

Subscribe for free IELTS lessons/Books/Tips/Sample Answers/Advice from our IELTS experts. We help millions of IELTS learners maximize their IELTS scores!

Subscribe to IELTS Material to receive the latest lessons
Written By

Improve your IELTS skills with tips, model answers, lessons, free books, and more ------------ "The more you share, the more you get."

Welcome to IELTS Material! Check it daily to receive useful IELTS books, practice tests and tips to get high score in IELTS exam