Sample Essay for Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 Topic 42 – Bar Chart

Model answer 03:

The bar chart depicts the information about the percentage participation of men working positions as a senior development in three different companies (IBM, Microsoft, and Apple) in 1980 until 2010. As shown in the bar chart, the IBM company has the most rapid growth of men working as a senior development. It features that in 1980 and 1985 the percentage of men was only slightly above 0% and began to increase in 1990 with slightly above 10% up to 63% in 2010. Different with the Microsoft company which shows a more average growth of men working in a senior development posts in the first few years with slightly under 10% in 1980 and began to rise up to 45% in the year of 2010. However, the most fluctuate growth of percentage participation of men as a senior development works in Apple company. Even though in the year 1980 it has the highest percentage of men working with 15% it then began to fall about 2% in 1985 and began to rise again in 1990 until 1995. Then began to decrease in 2000 with slightly under 20% before it arose again to 25% in 2010. From the information of the bar chart, the IBM company shows the highest rate of percentage of men working in a senior development positions. (218 words)

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