Academic IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic 02

Model answer 08:

Cristiano Ronaldo, David Beckham, Tiger wood are some famous sports professionals who earns the great deal. The reason behind these great deals is the constant media attention on them.  However it is true that they do not contribute too much in society like doctors and scientist.

Sports professionals who earn the great deal of money are the hard workers on their respective field.  They use all their efforts for the success of their one and of their teams.  The person with real talent in the field are very few that is why they worth the deal. Even more, A player have a short career and he is tested in that period with the massive competition on respective field. The pressure of media is intense and there is no privacy in their life. So, this can also justify the huge earnings.

However, Sports professional does not contribute more for the society. Other high profile professional like doctors provides great contribution to the society by treating sick and injured people. Furthermore, scientists who work for the new invention and climate change also contribute more for the society. If we favour these points then they must have the great deal of money. However, salary of sports professional is not determined by the percentage they contribute to society.

Personally, I think the mega deal of money sports professional received are more justified then the huge earning movie star. This also point out the importance and value of sports than on other professions and achievements.

(Approximately 250 words)

[ Answer by Sunil Pandit ]

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