Academic IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic 04

Model answer 02:

It is fact that, today’s children are involved in dangerous games which increase the rate of crime. This unconscious crime committed by little-aged children considerably increases in some contemporary cities.

It is not easy to keep an eye on your children, especially when you are busy with another issues at home. Children are interested almost in everything at home. However, they are not capable of distinguish toys or appropriate tools for playing and another things which can cause unwillingly bad accident at home. The most important fact about it is to watch violent videos on TV and fighting games on computers. As a result of watching such programmes every child could want to put it into practise. This can also be seen with clothes washing machine. When parents are not home, children generally use forbidden house equipment. To take similar occasion for example, that was in Turkey. Two boys wanted to play with washing machine when their parents had not been at home. One of them wanted to “wash” the other brother. While pressing the bottom to start it, unfortunately, the little brother was a sacrificed of this terrible accident because of parents’ carelessness. To avoid this, parents should take away every risky thing from their children and limit the watching TV or ban violent video games.

In conclusion, I absolutely agree that, some violent games cause children to take a risk in their lives. This unwanted crime committed by children can turn them a real criminal in the future. The way to play such violent games naturally, increase the crime in mean developed cities, which parents work and can not keep eyes on their children as much as they want in it. Instead of it we have to make all of our efforts on bringing them up in safe atmosphere and educate well. We must not forget that, they are our future. That’s why it must the first and considerable important thing to protect them from every occasion can cause frightening accident.

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