MODEL ESSAY 03:
Nowadays, many people believe that education in university level is the only way to get a good job. In contrast, some people think that working after high school is better since they can obtain experience in work environment. I will outline both issues with reasons and examples.
Talking about good job, it is not easy to achieve. We have to prepare ourselves both in terms of education and skill because they need to cooperate to make a good capability in ourselves, which we know as a prior thing that employers seek in the employees. For example, in the case of job interview, employer commonly ask about our last education whether it is appropriate with job position or not. They believe that higher education provides people not only in knowledge term but also their maturity.
Furthermore, through university education, we are not only given subsequences of theories but also practices. So, before we go to the work field, we already know how to adapt with our expected job based on our background education.
It is true that we need experience to do better in our job, but it cannot be denied that education is more important than it. Take a teacher’s career as an example. By teaching earlier, you may have more experience than the new one who just graduated from university. But graduated university students can teach their students with better theories or concept from each material with good methods.
To sum up, I must say that we need higher education to gain more information from the experts about our special field, therefore we can do our best to show our capability in front of employer to emphasize them that we deserve that job. So, I tend to disagree that work after school is better than to continue our study at university.
(302 Words) [ Written by – Tuty Starlet ]
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