MODEL ESSAY 08:
A large number of people argue that starting out to work just after high school is very beneficial of experiencing in the work environment, whereas the other believe that people will have brighter jobs as if finishing of university education. In this essay, I would like to discuss the two views and spread my own thought for the issue.
Many people say that applying to employ at workplace such as shops and companies after the school helps people quickly earning money and probably covering themselves. However, usually they just can approach at general or average wage levels as lack of professional expertise, so what is happening if they are marriage while their salary is just enough for their own life. Furthermore, they might be even in trouble when they get sick or entire.
People working after school can absorb real experience work from what they are doing. Nevertheless although we can be expert in our work, we are just good at one part of the entire production. In contrast, as completing university education, we can oversee a general whole picture so that we will come to better decision for our future jobs. It is usually to see that people who is graduated or higher education are obviously able to hold more important positions in companies, CEO and CFO, for example.
To sum up, even though each decision is likely to lead to certain upsides, working after completing advance education is far better for future job than the other does, because I think that learning path is hard, the life path is even harder.
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