Academic IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic 13

MODEL ESSAY 10:

In today’s world, fast food is one of the main problems of all countries. Fast food causes many health problems including the overweight issue. The proportion of eating fast food among young people is growing year by year and this is why the overweight issue is getting worse over time.

It is believed that increasing the number of fast food outlets such as McDonalds is creating the health problem. As these cafes and fast food outlets are convenient and near to our home or work place, they have become part of our life in spite of their harmfulness. Children who eat from those fast food shops do not know what is good and what is bad for their health. Nowadays even parents are consuming these foods even after knowing they are not beneficial for our health. This problem does not only create the overweight, besides this, it can cause heart attack and other health problems.

Busy parents cannot to take care of their children and can’t maintain a balance diet for them. It is common opinion for the working class parents and that is why children eat more and more fast food without control and become fattier. Moreover, parents are grown-up enough to know what is healthy and what is unhealthy for their kids. That is why parents should help their children to make a right decision on the way of eating food. Some people think that, parents with kids can always go to restaurants where hygienic dishes are served.

As far as I am concerned, parents are more blameworthy than fast food outlets. Parents want to do their best and make their children’s lives more colorful and sound. And they should not work all day, and it would be better if parent can arrange more time for their kids. Also in my opinion parents should cook delicious foods at home, teach their kids about balance diet, ask them to avoid harmful foods and inspire them to do some exercise.

(Approximately 330 words)
(This model answer was written by Sherzod Djuraev,IELTS 8.5.)

 

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