MODEL ESSAY 02:
Currently,a great attention has been paid to dramatic increase in overweight children.There is some factors to occur such big issue.Some people believe that easy to get fast food by expanding fast food shop is cause. Others believe that their parents do not pay attention to own children’s health.Definitely both views may be truly factor for occurring this issue but It seems to me,there is other possible element.
Present any society,fast food shops can be found easily.It is certainly involved growing phenomenon of globalisation.When it is considered about influence for our living,there is many benefit indeed but disadvantages as well.Some of disadvantages may concern about occurring the fact.Focusing on the disadvantage,it promotes to extend to working time longer.As a result,it is really difficult to find time to make meal by career women who have children hence people tend to have meal at fast food and the fact also may encourage to expand fast food business.
Regarding second opinion,which parents do not care about own children’s health,this thought seems to link which I mentioned previous paragraph as my surmise. Young parents,who are around 35,I do not think they have residence against fast foods;Because,for them,fast food has always been around them since they were adolescence. Besides,they do not have much time to provide rich nutritional foods.
There is possible to become other factor which may be quality of taste. TO contrast with fastfood and home made food,I do not think both taste are totally different.In other words,almost same taste.Therefore people who play a role of cook do not think it deserve to sacrifice own time for making meal. Having said I mentioned it is sure younger should have nutritional food indeed.So all of factor seems to concern globalisation hence what we should do at first as solution is people make effort to have much time to make meal and avoid fast foods.
To sum up,there is some of factor to occur that issue but It seems to me,all of factor links to globalisation.Anyhow,we should try to avoid eating fastfood and make meals.
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