Academic IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic 13

MODEL ESSAY 05:

Increasing number of overweight children in developing nations is a major problem which is always open for a debate. This is a topical question nowadays. Regarding this issue, some people think that problem is due to rise in number of fast food centers while others point out that parents are responsible for lacking care on children’s health. I strongly opine that food habits are completely transformed which need to be rectified immediately.

On one hand, different types of foreign dishes are spread throughout the world. As children are more interested in these foods, they choose them without knowing cons about them. Consequently, a developing country cannot deny the entry of foreign trade which effects economy of nation. The ingredients used to prepare an item in the fast food outlets are of low quality but rich in fat contents and other elements which effect child’s health. factors behind increasing demand for fast food centers in low cost, instant availability of food and finally feasible in distance as grew in number, which are in every corner of street.

On the other hand, parents are more blamed due to this problem. There are many factors relevant to this. In this challenging world, both parents are willing to have job to adopt posh lifestyle and also to show their status. Consequently, there vision on the child’s food habit plunged to low level thus result in unhealthy food habits. Other reasons like hormonal imbalance or gene transfer from parents to children result in obesity. In this urban life families prefer to late parties, restaurant foods etc. These new interests devastated healthy food habits.

Finally, in short consumption of fast foods should be reduced gradually simultaneously parents ought to pay more concentration on children habits and also force them to do exercises which keep body it.

(Approximately 300 words)
(This model answer has been submitted by Kalyan Chakravarthy, IELTS Teacher)

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