Art is Considered an Essential Part of all Cultures Throughout the World – IELTS Writing Task 2

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Janice Thompson

Janice Thompson

Soon after graduating with a Master’s in Literature from Southern Arkansas University, she joined an institute as an English language trainer. She has had innumerous student interactions and has produced a couple of research papers on English language teaching. She soon found that non-native speakers struggled to meet the English language requirements set by foreign universities. It was when she decided to jump ship into IELTS training. From then on, she has been mentoring IELTS aspirants. She joined IELTSMaterial about a year ago, and her contributions have been exceptional. Her essay ideas and vocabulary have taken many students to a band 9.

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Sanghamitra Sarkar

Posted on May 14, 2022

Arts reflect the heritage of the nation and creativeness of an individual. However in modern days, many people think that devoting attention towards arts is a waste time. In reality the youth tend to focus more on science, technology and business which will help them to get job upon graduation easily. It’s opposite to my point of view, as I believe that arts is also equally important as science for the progression of the nation.

Many youngster thinks that diverting their attention towards arts will hamper them financially in near future. For example, in this era of digitalization doing specialization in fields like engineering, doctors, teacher will be help them to land with better package than that of arts. As monetary fund by government is mostly invested in Hospital , transportations, schools and in other infrastructures. So working on this fields will provide them more opportunities in work field.

Most of the people now a days takes Arts as a hobby rather than a profession and the importance of Arts is slowly disappearing from society. This problem can alleviate by depicting importance of Arts among young generations with the help of seminars and plays where artists can show that science and arts can go hand in hand. More number of galleries and theaters should be funded by the government which will attract tourists all over the world and will help to boost the economy of the country and at the same time will inspire young generation in a positive way to take up arts as there choice of profession. A joint effort from the government and private bodies should be taken to create more job opportunities in arts to encourage people to take up different form of arts like painting, singing, dancing and acting as their major.

In conclusion, It is clear to me that focusing in science is vital but arts is also equally importance. Arts can also be a reliable source of livelihood. The government effort can help people to understand the value of arts, as it’s the only way to keep the culture and tradition intact for the future generation.

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kasturika

kasturika

Posted on May 16, 2022

Band Score – 6

Concentrate on the correct usage of articles, verb forms, prepositions, subject-verb agreement and punctuation.

Pay attention to spellings and correct use of words in a sentence.

Follow the conventions. Only the first letter of the word in a sentence and proper nouns must be in capitals and there should be proper space between words.

Use C2 level of words.

Niral

Posted on Mar 11, 2022

It has been noticed by some individuals that art plays a vital role in every culture globally. Although, only some amount of popultion is rewarding art and mostly emphasis on science, technology and business. I belive this phenomenon is occured beacuse of insufficient knowdelge about culture, which attracts more public, hence, we could motivate people by organizing events appropriately.

To begin with, the foremost reason of art is not being appreaciated by the society is due to lack of imformation about culture and history. In other words, since technology has been imtroduced to the youth from their early age, therefore, they are more likely to expose themselves to new devices and seeking data related to their work purposes. Not only adults are fascinated with video games and other medias, but also nowaday, elderly citizens are more attracted towards hi-tech. A good example of this is parents are the role models of every child. However, they are mostly using digital gadgets, when a child is around them instead of demonstrating him handcraft, which they might know, therefore, a toddler is automatically learning what his family is doing. This directly indicates that shortgage of knowledge among youth theseday may leads to an extinction of important art.

Despite, there are certain measures could be taken to address this issue. The main approach is conducting events by government and schools. To explain futher, if authorities are willing to introduce cultural art such as Knitting, classical music and woodencraft by showing people and encurage masses to participate. In addition, education centres could also add this extra activities and give prize to students. By doing this, community can sustain culture of art and also motive their children to show their creativity and imagination, which might aid them to choose career path and embrace new opportunities in their way.

In conclusion, it can be eventually said that presently, people are less likely to invole in art completition and give priority to new developed technology. I think proper awareness and guidance by government and institutions can provide positive impacts on upcoming generation, in order to preserve art.

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kasturika

kasturika

Posted on Mar 14, 2022

Band Score – 5

Concentrate on the correct usage of preposition, articles, verb forms, pronouns and punctuation.
Pay attention to capitalization, proper spacing and spellings/ words in a context.
Use the C2 level of words.

NISY JOHN PANICKER

Posted on Jan 10, 2022

Many people believe that arts form an important part of every culture around the world. But in today’s world, only less numbers of people are attracted towards arts and majority are interested in science, technology and business. In my opinion, I believe it’s because of the less income people getting being an artist and the difficulty in becoming a reputed artist. There are several measures which should be implemented to solve this problem.
Firstly, the reason for people not opting for arts is due to the low income they are paid when compared to the engineering and business fields. Artists don’t earn steadily like the other professions as they are needed only when there is a demand for them, a musical concert or an exhibition, for instance. Secondly, the decline in interest towards arts is because of the difficulty in becoming a reputed artist. People always look for an artist who has a high expertise in that field and it takes quite a long time to be in that position for them.
There are two effective solutions to the problem of less focus towards arts. One way to tackle this is to ensure that art is being taught as a subject in schools along with the elementary ones. Children should study at least one of them compulsorily and this would in turn make many of them, in future, to pursue higher studies in the field of arts. Another method is to provide pensions to people working in these fields, for example, sculptures, painters, musicians etc, by the government. Every one ultimately looks for financial stability and this scheme would definitely encourage people to turn up for arts.
In conclusion, developing the interest for arts right from small age and providing good pay with pension system can help many individuals to be attracted towards arts. This eventually results in the development of culture which is a heritage owned by a country.

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Janice Thompson

Janice Thompson

Posted on Jan 10, 2022

Band score: 5
Concentrate on verb forms, prepositions, articles

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