Many Museums Charge for Admission While Others are Free – IELTS Writing Task 2

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Many Museums Charge for Admission While Others are Free – IELTS Writing Task 2
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Sameera

Posted on Nov 8, 2023

Nobody can deny the fact that, In present scenario, English language play a crucial role in our society by reason of other than native language, English use as a secondary language in every country.Hence learning English at school is more Vital than learning local languages.
According to my point of view, we are bount to write ,read and understand the English language owing to capable of interact with other people in any country.On the one hand, If we take the  example of ielts test where only English language require for crack the test.On the other hand if we talk about job interview where the employer take the interview only on in English. So what should we do.Our system called that learning English is an absolutely important for us rather than learning local languages. Local languages supported only on early stage of our life as well as in local area.If we would decide to go abroad therefore English language require.Many of the parents taught English language for the betterment of their child in an initial stage of there life. Several families should try to communicate with their children only in English so that they do not face problem in the future.
At the end , in the light of above mentioned aspects, I hold the view that, it is a government responsibility to take a charge of equality of every languages. This wil help to the survival of local languages. Local languages almost at the stage of dying out. Now a days English is a main language.

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IELTS Expert

Posted on Nov 9, 2023

Band 5 : The essay responds to the task only in a minimal way and presents a position but this is unclear
It presents information and ideas but these are not arranged coherently and there is no clear progression
in the response. The essay uses some basic cohesive devices. Only Basic vocabulary is used and a very limited range of structures with only
rare use of subordinate clauses.
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