IELTS Writing Task 2 Topic: Work and Career

Some people believe that having a job is the most crucial thing in one’s life because without it life becomes unpurposed. In my opinion, going to work daily provides everyone a new energy to live their life to the fullest and hence I completely agree with the given statement. This essay will outline the reasons in regard to the view mentioned above.
To begin with, having work, eliminates the feeling of being dependent; people become self-sufficient in handling their spending. Moreover, it evokes a sense of responsibility within them as they start paying their own expenses like house rent, electricity bill etc.

Furthermore, having a good career life shapes the personality of an individual in several ways. For instance, when faced with challenges at work, people tend to become more persistent and determined. Consequently, a successful work life makes people more confident and disciplined. Additionally, throughout the career one can find true friendship that they could cherish for life.
In contrast, unsuccessful people end up feeling unworthy, due to sitting all day long and doing nothing; they can also indulge in overthinking which can have negative impact in their lives. Also, they are often judged by our society, for not having a goal in their life which eventually makes them feel tensed and depressed.

To sum up, being focused and ambitious is one of the most important element of the life skills, people without it are considered to be complete failures and hence having a successful career makes life meaningful and world, a better place to live.

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Hi Mam,

For the same question, I have written my own answer. Can you please give me feedback on the same.

The question of success in career makes people’s life adorable and in the other hand, there are many things which can make people’s life meaningful. I generally believe that, Success in career is important for survival of life. However, life becomes meaningless without happiness and peace. The one should survive by following his dreams and passion instead of routine job. In our past generation, most of them are dependent on agriculture and they live a happy life with their families.
In current situation, I agree that career plays a crucial role in people’s life to achieve their goals and to accomplish family needs and for good health. Perhaps, if he wants to live a lavish life then money is much needed in that case career is most important.
Now a days, I believe that People are more interested in creativity, arts, fashion or any other different lively jobs rather than doing a nine to six job. And more people are interested in travelling. In that they can make plenty money as well as job satisfaction. Because, they are loving what they are doing as a job.
In my opinion, work is not the only option to make life meaningful. Bunch of things are there in this adorable world that can make people’s life wonderful. There are things like traveler, Vlogs, influencer etc., they are earning sufficient for living and they are living joyful life comparing to the normal job holder’s life. Finally, I strongly believe, career is not making people’s life meaningful rather lively things makes people’s life Meaningful.

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