In spite of the Advances Made in Agriculture Many People Around the World still go Hungry – IELTS Writing Task 2

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In spite of the Advances Made in Agriculture Many People Around the World still go Hungry – IELTS Writing Task 2

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Janice Thompson

Janice Thompson

Soon after graduating with a Master’s in Literature from Southern Arkansas University, she joined an institute as an English language trainer. She has had innumerous student interactions and has produced a couple of research papers on English language teaching. She soon found that non-native speakers struggled to meet the English language requirements set by foreign universities. It was when she decided to jump ship into IELTS training. From then on, she has been mentoring IELTS aspirants. She joined IELTSMaterial about a year ago, and her contributions have been exceptional. Her essay ideas and vocabulary have taken many students to a band 9.

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Kelvin

Posted on Apr 16, 2022

Although the world keeps developing and the technologies are better, there are also still so many problems left to solve such as food shortages, increasing amounts of waste and population, etc. For human beings, as eating is one the necessary things to survive, the hunger problem becomes a prioritised problem. Even though scientists are making agricultural techniques more advanced and advanced, the effects on the main problem is relatively very small. It is pointing that we should focus more on the cause of the problem.

The number of people in developing countries who are facing hunger problems are relatively massive compared to developed countries. The developing countries are the countries which still can’t focus on the technologies because they have many other problems to solve which are more important. It is also clear that they won’t afford such high technologies in fields like agriculture which are usually done by lower class people in such kind of countries. On the other hand, the people from developed countries are producing way more foods and most of them are being wasted.

To solve these problems, there are many ways to be acted and also acting now.In general, most of the global problems should be solved by developed countries because of rich technologies and finance. First thing that should be done is to decrease the amount of waste and to provide these to the needs. They should welcome more refugees especially countries which are facing food scarcity. Second thing would be to sell the modern agricultural things with affordable amounts to the farmers. There are also things that can be done by the government of these developing countries such as making agriculture more widespread among wealthy people and sharing technological ideas to people who are making agriculture.

All in all, we all can participate in solving the global hunger problem by decreasing waste, making charity and volunteering in agricultural fields. We can learn modern techniques and make our backyard-gardens useful. It is also important for us to solve our own problems because we shouldn’t just be waiting for the help of the other developed countries.

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kasturika

kasturika

Posted on Apr 18, 2022

Band Score – 6

Concentrate on the correct usage of articles, verb forms, prepositions, pronouns and punctuation.

Pay attention to spacing between words.

The essay contains many repeated words and phrases. Use C2 level of words to increase your score.

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