IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Topic 01: Maximum number of Asian elephants – Graph

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Deepabista65gmailcom

Posted on Jan 1, 2024

The graph illustrates the changes of maximum number of Asian elephants over the time period between 1994 and 2007.
Overall, looking the graph it is clear that most of the countries had higher Asian elephant population than 2007 except China and Cambodia. About 10,000 elephants were recorded in India on 1997 which was the highest compared to other countries which later drastically fell down to approximately 75,000 on 2007. After India Myanmar is the second leading country to have elephant population in both 1994 and 2007.
Most of the country had population below 2,500 from the begining of the data. Most of the countries have decline rate of elephant but China and Cambodia have grown the popilation coming by the time of 2007. There are also other countries like Vietnam and Laos which doesnot have much coming upto 2007. China seem to have a lowest population of elephants and even though its population had been increased it is still the lowest of all
of the nation.

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IELTS Expert

Posted on Jan 2, 2024

Overall Band: 5
The recounting of detail is mainly mechanical. There is no data to support the description. Simple vocabulary is used accurately but the range does not permit much variation in expression.

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Ahsan Miah

Posted on Dec 30, 2023

The bar chart depicts direrent mode of transportation used by school
children to go to and come from school in 1990 and 2010 in a country
Overall, it is evident that significant changes can be recognized across
all of these transportation modes that the children adopt on their way
between school and nome in 1990 and 2010.
A substantial rising number of car passenger is be notinied in 2010 at
about 11 million which was just above 4 million in 1990. In contrast, a
totally diferent trend is also noticed in the mode of walking where the
number of the students were above 12 million in 1990 for going to
school which has been decreased by a gigantic margin and reached to
the half in amount in 2010. Therefore, a profound decline in the mode of
cycling, walking and bus and only bus is aiso a trendy factor in the chart.
In 1990, school children used these modes at a number near about 6
million approximately but the number of Children in thege mode ot
transportation also been decelerated to 2, 3 and 5 million respectively

evaluate this wiriting for writng task 1 and give me a band score

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IELTS Expert

Posted on Jan 2, 2024

Overall Band: 5
The recounting of detail is mainly mechanical. There is no data to support the description. Simple vocabulary is used accurately but the range does not permit much variation in expression.

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Suraj

Posted on Dec 17, 2023

The bar chart illustrates the maximum population of elephants in Asian countries in the years 1997 and 2004.

Most of the countries a decline in the elephant population from 1997 to 2004, with the exceptions of Cambodia and China, which experience the opposite. The nations with the most notable decline are india, Thailand and Malaysia. Even though there is downfall in the elephant population in India, it still remains the country with the most number of elephants in both the years.

India, Malaysia, Sri Lanka, Myanmar and Thailand are countries that cross the 2,500 mark in 1997, with India being remarkably ahead of the others with a population of nearly 10,000 elephants which decreases to 7,500 in 2004. Malayasia and Thailand see a significant decrease in the population nd go below the 2,500 mark. Sri Lanka replaces Thailand as the nation with the third largest elephant population in 2004.

Vietnam, Cambodia, Loas and China have less than 2500 elephants in 1997. China has the lowest in that year with the number standing at around 1000. This number notably increases to around 1500 elephants. Similarly Cambodia also experiences a slight increase in 2004. The rest have almost the same population in 2004.

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IELTS Expert

Posted on Dec 17, 2023

Overall Band: 5
Key features which are selected are not adequately covered. The recounting of detail is mainly mechanical. Although complex sentences are attempted, they tend to be faulty, and the greatest accuracy is achieved on simple sentences.
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Balasaraswathinadendla4gmailcom

Posted on Nov 23, 2023

The bar graph illustrates the estimated maximum population of elephants in Asia from nine different nations between two years(1997 and 2004).

Please check the introduction.

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IELTS Expert

Posted on Nov 24, 2023

Hello
The introduction written is incomplete without the overall statement.
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Manpreet-kaur

Posted on Nov 20, 2023

The bar graph given illustrates the variation in the Asian elephant’s population in the year 1994 and year 2004.
Overall,two countries including India and Mayanmar had the most number of elephants during both the years. However, certainly countries like Vietnam, Cambodia and Laos had almost similar figures of this mammal’s population.
Among all the asian countries, India had maximum number of elephants residing with unbeatable figures of 10,000 in 1997. which drastically decreased to 7500 in 2004. Similarly the country with the second highest section of elephants lived there is Mayanmar with a little decline figuring around 5500 and below respectively.

Other countries like Vietnam, Cambodia and Laos had almost similar crowd of asian elephants accounting nearly 1250 in both the years. Furthermore, China and Combodia were the only nations where their population surged but somehow numbers did not exceed 1500 during 2004.

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IELTS Expert

Posted on Nov 22, 2023

Overall Band: 5
Organisation is evident but is not wholly logical and there is a lack of overall progression. Nevertheless, there is a sense of underlying coherence to the response. Thus the user needs to work on the coherence and cohesion. Vocabulary used is simple, user must use enhanced words of vocabulary to enhance the scores.

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Chusnul-khotimah

Posted on Nov 20, 2023

The bar chart illustrates the figure of maximum population of Asian elephants in 1997 and 2004. Nine Asian countries showed different data of the population of Asian elephants.
Overall, we can tell that there were the decreasing number of Asian elephants in almost all countries from 1997 to 2004. Most countries had the large population of elephants in 1994. Malaysia and Thailand showed the most dramatic fall in elephant populations. Less than half of number dropped from around 2700 to 1000 in Malaysia, and from around 3500 to 1000 in Thailand. While Asian nations dominantly fell in the population of elephants, China and Cambodia showed slightly rise in the number of those mammals. The figure of population of Asian elephants in Laos remained same in 1997 and 2004.
Despite India was the country where had the highest number of Asian elephants in both years, it showed a significant fall from nearly 10.000 to 7500 in 2004.

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IELTS Expert

Posted on Nov 20, 2023

Hello Chusnul-khotimah,
Band 5 – The report does touch upon parts of the essay but need to be in detail.
Also, The vocabulary used is good but is not uniformly used. Grammatical range and variety of sentences also should be elaborate.
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Tysakajagmailcom

Posted on Nov 12, 2023

The bar graph compares the approximated number of elephants in different countries in Asia between the years 1997 to 2004.
From the graph, the total number of elephants in India sharply decreased by 1/4 from its initial number of 10000 in 1997. Despite India having the highest decrease, Thailand and Malayasia experienced had the most significant numbers of elephants decrease by more than half from 1997.Thailand had approximately 3500 while Malayasia had nearly 2750 initially, however they all fell to around 1000 in 2004. In spite of most countries experiencing a decline in number of elephants, Cambodia and China were the only countries to have a surge in number of elephants with China having a more significant increase to about 1000 from roughly 500 in 1997.
Overall, the number of elephants dropped in 2004 as compared to 1997 in almost all countries apart from China and Cambodia whose numbers increased but still had recorded one of the lowest figures

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IELTS Expert

Posted on Nov 15, 2023

Overall Band 4:
Key features which are selected are not adequately covered. The recounting of detail is mainly mechanical. Simple vocabulary is used accurately but the range does not permit much variation in expression. The user needs to enhance the grammatical range and vocabulary.
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Asmita koirala

Posted on Nov 8, 2023

The graph illustrates the population of elephant in different asian country in the year between 1994 to2007
Overall, it can be apparently conclude that, most of the inspected country faced drop in the population of asian elephant except china
Going through the bar chart in more details,asian elephants was highly found in india by around 10000 in the year 1997 which dramatically escalated and reached 7500 in 2007. Interestingly, Myanmar has 5000 elephant inhabitants for the begining examined year which got slightly drop by just below 5000 in 2007. Furthermore, vietnam, cambodia and laos remained almost identical by staying below 2500 . China was the least populated by asian elephant by approximately 1000 and rose in the year 2007

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IELTS Expert

Posted on Nov 9, 2023

Band 4 :The word count of the writeup is quite low. The description and important data is missing. Vocabulary is very basic and can be improved upon. The range of grammatical structures used is very basic and should be worked upon.
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Shivam Miglani

Posted on Oct 21, 2023

The graph illustrates the approximate maximum population of Elephants in Asia. It shows a comparing view of how the numbers have changed from 1997 to 2004. A total of 9 regions are considered.
The maximum population has either fallen or remained flat in 7 observations. Only two places have shown positive growth i.e., China and Cambodia. Of which China is the least populated. Laos’s numbers remained same over the years. Vietnam has seen a very small degrowth.
Most populated country is India touching almost a mark of 10000 in 1997. However, it has seen the biggest drop amongst all, approximately 2500 in the year 2004. Myanmar followed by Thailand are also part of top 3 most populated regions. The biggest percentage drop can be seen in Thailand in 2004. Malayasia can also be said to have lost significant cases similarly Sri Lanka has also degrown.
If aggregated, it can be observed that the population has decreased in the mentioned time period. Only a couple of areas have recorded some tiny bit of growth.

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IELTS Expert

Posted on Nov 28, 2023

Overall Band: 5.5
The relationship of ideas can be followed but the sentences are not fluently linked to each other. Thus the answer lacks the use of cohesive devices. The range of grammar structures is limited and rather repetitive.

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Sim

Posted on Oct 18, 2023

The bar chart indicates the movement of populations of Asian elephants from 1997 to 2007 across different nations.

In 1997, the population of Asian elephants was the highest in India, approximately 10, 000 elephants remained, followed by Myanmar and Thailand. The amount was recorded slightly above 5,000 for Myanmar and around 3,750 in Thailand. On the other hand, the quantity of Asian elephants in China was recorded as the lowest. The trend remained similar in the year 2004. India remained the country with the highest number of Asian elephants, 7,500 elephants available while China as the lowest amount of Asian elephants, around 1,500.

By comparing the bars, the quantity of Asian elephants in India has reduced significantly from 10,000 to 7,500. The same trend was discovered in Thailand and Malaysia. Both countries experienced a plummet in the number of Asian elephants more than 50%. It is interesting to notice that, despite as country with the lowest quantity of Asian elephants, elephants in China have risen nearly 50% compared to 1997.

In summary, most of Asian countries experienced a similar trend across the year 1997 to 2004 except China. However, the changes in the numbers of Asian elephants were varied, with certain countries experienced significant changes.

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ria mahajan

Posted on Oct 19, 2023

Overall band: 6
The response focuses on the requirements of the task and an appropriate format is used.The meaning is generally clear in spite of a rather restricted range of vocabulary.A very limited range of grammatical structures is used.

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