The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking – IELTS Writing Task 2 Argumentative Essay

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The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking – IELTS Writing Task 2 Argumentative Essay

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Hathy.Pham

Posted on May 10, 2022

Smartphones are supposed to be eliminated from the public such as in common means of transport, in movies theatres, or in restaurants while some people argue that mobile phones should be used everywhere. From my personal perspective, this gadget has several crucial advantages and disadvantages.
To begin with, firstly, this technical marvel could become a target for thieves. Nowadays, a mobile phone is known as a high-tech innovation that is applied to numerous artificial intelligent inventions, so it costs a huge amount of money, especially the latest version. Therefore, people going outside with such gadgets could potentially encounter with the risk of being robbed. Secondly, using smartphone publicly could bring disturbance to others. To be more illustrated, in the cinema, any ringtones or light from mobile phones would attract viewers’ attenttion and make their concentration on the film wanders. (Degrade the experience)
On the other hand, thanks to this technical device, users could save time due to working remotely and everywhere. For example, employees could check and answer emails while traveling to offices or keep tracking and discussing with coworkers when being a business trip. In contrast, people could not work effectively and conveniently like that. Moreover, smartphones could be fashion accessories for users to show characteristics, especially the Millenials. This high-tech gadget is not only a device to experience the latest technological initiatives but also to express energy and personal passion.
To be concluded, smartphones, one of the greatest inventions in the world, offer numerous benefits for users but at the same time, a heavy price could be paid if people do not use them properly in public.

Please help to give me an IELTS band

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kasturika

kasturika

Posted on May 11, 2022

Band Score – 5.5

Concentrate on the correct usage of subject-verb agreement, tense, prepositions and punctuation.

Pay attention words used in a context and learn error-free sentence formation

Use C2 level of words.

Salley

Posted on Jun 21, 2016

I’m asking for help again.Would you please send me all the sample answers for task 1and task 2 to me?

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