A Lot of Places in the World Rely on Tourism as a Main Source of Income – IELTS Writing Task 2

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A Lot of Places in the World Rely on Tourism as a Main Source of Income – IELTS Writing Task 2

Practice IELTS Writing Task 2 based on Essay types

Janice Thompson

Janice Thompson

Soon after graduating with a Master’s in Literature from Southern Arkansas University, she joined an institute as an English language trainer. She has had innumerous student interactions and has produced a couple of research papers on English language teaching. She soon found that non-native speakers struggled to meet the English language requirements set by foreign universities. It was when she decided to jump ship into IELTS training. From then on, she has been mentoring IELTS aspirants. She joined IELTSMaterial about a year ago, and her contributions have been exceptional. Her essay ideas and vocabulary have taken many students to a band 9.

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Hasnain Malik

Posted on Apr 25, 2022

There are so many countries in the World which rely solely on tourism to boost up their economy. Maldives, Switzerland and UAE, etc. are among such countries. Similarly, some countries have faced serious problems due to mismanagemet and maladministration in the field of tourism. North Korea, Pakistan and Afghanistan are among such countries. Tourism can affect substatially on country’s economy and if it is being handled with effective planning and management; it can be an economic boom.

Maldives, Switzerland, UAE, Greenland and many other are among those, whose largest source of income is tourism. Some other places like USA, Canada and almost whole Europe earn more than 30% of their GDP from tourism department. In addition to income, it also play a pivotal role in connecting different nations, traditions, customs, wearing styles, costumes and what not as these places are being used as the connectors of different peoples all over the World.

There are some disadvantages of tourism too. It costs much on ensuring safety and security of tourists. Particular Government has to bear the burden of the cost of safety of foreign tourists and it will ultimately put pressure on taxpayers. Provision of seasonal and particular food for particular nationals, living places and proper management of transportation channels are other serious problems of the Government.

In my opinion, benefits of tourism can easily be outweighted if tourism is being taken into serious considerations faithfully and religiously with marvellous planning and management.




Posted on Apr 26, 2022

Band Score – 5.5

Concentrate on the correct usage of article, verb, prepositions, pronoun and punctuation.

The word count is low at 242. It has to be a minimum of 250 words.

Pay attention to spellings, capitalization and learn error free sentence formation.

Use C2 level words.

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