IELTS Writing 2 Topic: Teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge

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Jagpreet

Posted on Jul 11, 2017

My answer for the same topic. please access it. thnks
People have different opinions regarding teacher roles. Some of them believe that teacher should teach students about moral values along with other subjects, while others support only academic lectures should be given by tutor. In my opinion, combination of both subjects is the best choice to teach.

On the one hand, several reasons exist that teachers should focus mainly on their primary subjects. First and foremost, the most important things for children that helps them in future come from learning books. Take an example of math and science subjects, there is a huge job opportunities for those who have the information of these subjects. Thus, the main role of educators equipped children with these skills. Second cause of this thinking is that, people believe that parents normally spend more time with their offspring’s and understand them more closely than any other person, therefore they can provide the necessary information about ethical behavior by assigning multiple tasks to them. Finally, providing moral principles is not a school business, parents should be focus on that.

On the other hand, I believe that teachers should contribute somewhat to a student’s moral education. The most obvious point of in this regard is that, teachers nowadays spend much more time with kids than their parents, because kids’ parents have their jobs too and after they return to home from work, they don’t have much time to give it to their children. Another positive viewpoint is that, educators can make the groups of many children and can efficiently impart life-skills to many individuals at the same time. This is to say that, badly behaved kids also become good one after participating in groups when they have intelligent children in their group.

In conclusion, It’s seem to me that teachers don’t restrict themselves to academic instructions, but also try to impart knowledge to children about their personal behavior.

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Posted on Jul 11, 2017

Hi,
Please find below some feedback and comment on your essay:
 Grammar: It’s seem ==> it seems, that helps ==> that help, the main role of educators equipped children with ==> the main role of educators is to equip children with
 Some problems with usage of vocabulary ( those who have the information of these subjects ==> those who acquire sound knowledge of these subjects, etc)
From my perspective, your essay is around band 6.0. You shoud work on your grammar, vocabulary, and cohesion & coherence.

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