Sample Essay for Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 Topic 39 – Table

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting description of the correlation of the table that follow.

Write at least 150 words.Academic IELTS Writing Task 1 Topic 39

Model answer 01:

There is a clear correlation between the litres of beer consumed per capita and number of alcohol related deaths. The table shows that the greatest beer consumption in 2002 was to be found in Czech Republic, Germany and Austria, and that each of these regions also had by far the largest litres of alcohol related deaths in 2005. Czech Republic, with the greatest beer consumption per litre, namely over hundred and thirty for 2002, also experienced well over one million litres alcohol-related deaths by 2005. The region with the second highest beer consumption was Germany, with nearly 107 litres, and it also recorded the second highest number of alcohol-related deaths, namely 1.185 million.

In all regions except Canada it can be seen that the higher beer consumption, the higher the alcohol-related mortality rate. It is interesting that in Canada, with the lowest level of beer consumption, at 86 per capita, the mortality rate was the high as in Ireland, namely 0.58 million, although in the latter the consumption level was high. Clearly other health or economic factors must be involved. It is also interesting to note that in each case the number of female death was significantly lower than that of males, which seems to be a reflection of the fact that in general far fewer women than men drink.

(220 words)

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Model answer 02:

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting description of the correlation of the table that follow. The table gives the information about the alcohol related deaths by gender and country in 2005 and beers consumption per capita (litres) in 2002 by country. It is clear from the table that in each country the number of male death was significantly higher than that of females. Overall, the largest number of alcohol related deaths and greatest beer consumption was to be found in Czech Republic. However the lowest level of beer consumption was in Canada and lowest number of death in 2005 was in Lithuania. Moreover, the beer consumption per capita over 100 litres was in Czech Republic, Germany, Austria and Ireland. The second lowest beer consumption was Lithuania with 91 litres. Further, in 2005, number of death related to alcohol over one million was in Czech Republic and Germany. Also this mortality rate reached nearly one million in Austria with 913000. Highest mortality rate in female was in Czech Republic. In addition, this highest rate in male was in Germany.

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