IELTS Writing 2 Topic: International Sporting Occasions are Essential in Easing International Tensions

IELTS Writing 2 Topic: International Sporting Occasions are Essential in Easing International Tensions
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Hassaan Saleem

Posted on Sep 24, 2023

hi, could anyone evaluate my essay, thank you

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

From my point of view, I believe that this is a negative development and countries should build sports facilities that everyone can use in harmony with specialized facilities used to train top athletes.

Specialized facilities are built so that the countries’s athletes could achieve greatness in their respective sports which will inturn make the country popular enough that the people would want to visit it. this will allow more tourist attraction and this will help the country to generate alot of revenue. For example, when messi, the world’s greatest footballer won the fifa world cup, there was an increase in the number of people visiting Argentina just to see him celebrate his victory with his people. it also allows the oppurtunity for the country to host international events such as the olympics which ultimately increases the political and financial postion of the country.

However, sports facilities that every one can use should also be provided, as it helps to mantain a physically and mentally healthy body. Such facilities will allow teenagers to have a better activity to do instead of lying around all day in their rooms and watching tv or social media on the phone. Having a variety of sports facilities will allow them to be energetic, and will help them in their over all grooming and over all education, as they will learn how to work as a team and how to handle different situations.

In conclusion, a country should focus on develping both specialized and regular sports facilities as each has its own advantges in terms of genrerating a revenue through them or providing a healthy environemnt for its own citizens.

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ria mahajan

Posted on Oct 5, 2023

Overall band: 6.5
The main parts of the prompt are appropriately addressed.Paragraphing is generally used effectively to support overall coherence, and the sequencing of ideas within a paragraph is generally logical.
There are some errors in spelling and word formation, errors in grammar and punctuation are present, but rarely impede communication.

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