Paradise Island Map – IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Answers

Paradise Island Map – IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Answers
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Dinara-burabay

Posted on Sep 4, 2023

Could you evaluate my essay Process
The diagram illustrates the basic principles of producing cocoa powder. There are 11 main stages in the process, from initial producing cocoa pods 5-10 years to eventual adding it to drinks, cakes, biscuits.
Once cocoa pods have been grown for 5-10 years on the trees and then they contain 20-50 beans, they are harvested. After harvesting cocoa pods, the fruit is opened. As soon as fruit has been opened, fruit is fermented several weeks. Subsequently, cocoa pods are dried below the Sun for 1 week. At the 7th stage of the process, cocoa pods are sorted to remove bad ones and then packed in sacks.
During the next step, packing cocoa pods are delivered to the factories by ship. Before purchasing to the public, the cocoa pods are cleaned, grounded, roasted and blended carefully. As soon as have been cleaned, grounded, roasted, blended, the cocoa powder is used to the manufacture of chocolate biscuits, drinks, cakes and other necessities.
156 words.

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ria mahajan

Posted on Sep 5, 2023

Band -5
Key features which are selected are not adequately covered. The recounting of detail is mainly mechanical. There is a minimum data to support the description.There is a limited use of cohesive devices with some inaccuracy.The range of structures is limited and rather repetitive.

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Ritika

Posted on May 21, 2022

PLEASE EVALUATE THIS TASK 1
The charts below give information about the diet and general health of two groups of students.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart exhibits a comparison amidst two groups of pupils related to their nutrition pattern and overall health. In general it is quite obvious that half of the total food consumed in Group B students is taken over by food with a high calorie value that is high fat content. Whereas, it is merely over one fourth of the overall meal in Group A.

Furthermore, the percentage of vegetables and fruits i.e food of high nutritive value shares equal distribution of 5% amongst Group B students. In contrast, the ratio of greens and fruitage eaten by Group A is far much greater than mentee’s in Group B. While, the proportion of cereals and fish devoured are just alike in both the groups.

Consequently, there is a significant decline of their presence in classroom, followed by a remarkable number of obese learners and over double the count of diseased ones amongst them in comparison to just 5% from Group A, in addition.

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Glen Brown

Posted on May 23, 2022

Band Score: 5
The word count is more than the limit of 150 – 175 words
Use articles and prepositions correctly
Use punctuation wherever necessary

Roja

Posted on Apr 8, 2022

The maps show how a virgin island in 1990 has developed into a tourist resort now. Generally, within around 30 years, the island which seemed an unpromising place for holiday has turned to a tourist destination.

In 1990, the island was totally empty of any buildings and comfortable facilities, whereas currently it is actually hard to find any idle land. In fact, only the general shape of island and its beach has remained the same.

At the present time, there is a prominent building to host the guests in the center of the island, which is directly accessible from the pier at the south coast. This reception is also connected to a restaurant in the north edge, a suite in the west and a swimming pool in the east side joining to other accommodations in the northeast and a café. Other noticeable changes that
have taken place are presence of boats and ships in south harbor and a swimming spot in the north side of the beach.

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dszsa

Posted on Feb 10, 2022

The two maps illustrates how an island changes after building tourist facilities.

Overall, it can be seen that the island went through a lot of changes. New bulidings to accomodate visitors have been built while conserving the nature of the island.

The first map shows how barren the island was. The only visible things are trees on the eastern part and western part of the island and a beach. However, after constructing tourist attractions on the island, the island became much more diverse and attractive. A pier was built on the southern part of the island for boats that carry tourists to come through. Furthermore, swimming is now feasible unlike the past.

The second map also shows how the accomodations are built. They are built in a circular formation, one on the western side and the other on the eastern side. Moreover, the accomodations on the western side are surrounding the trees. In between the accomodations is the place where tourists go for reception. If one goes north from the reception, he or she will be able to reach the restaurant. Furthermore, it can be confirmed that even after renovation, the far eastern part of the island has been largely untouched, albeit a slight clearing of trees.

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Janice Thompson

Posted on Feb 11, 2022

Band score: 5

The minimum word count is 160. Though the upper limit is not specified, it is a good practice, not to exceed 170.
Concentrate on grammatical numbers, prepositions,
Take care of spellings.

Anu Mohanty

Posted on Dec 29, 2021

Here is my report. Thank you in advance.
The maps provide a comparison of the state of an island before and after the erection of some visitor facilities.
Overall, the island has changed considerably with the introduction of tourism. Four main new features can be seen in the second diagram that involves the building of a restaurant, reception accommodation, pier, and some insignificant modification.
Looking at the changes in more detail, we can see in the first map there was a primitive island covered by trees. By contrast, tourists can access the island by boat easily now thanks to the construction of a pier. A restaurant is behind a reception, built in the center of the island, and both are accessed via vehicle track. Meanwhile, the hosing areas are only reachable by footpath, situated on either side of the reception.
Furthermore, a beach in the west of the island is upgraded for swimming activities. Tourists can walk along the footpath from the accommodation area to here. Notably, there is a part of the island in the east that hasn’t been reclaimed yet.

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Janice Thompson

Posted on Dec 29, 2021

Band score: 6.5

Concentrate on the pronoun usage

Arman Gazi

Posted on Nov 15, 2021

Very nice! There is very well answer and I need to other topic in writing task 1 .

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Mitra

Posted on Jul 22, 2021

Thank you so much! this is a well-developed answer that inspired me a lot!

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